[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/xupdf article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/02/15 18:31:35

Modified files:
        xupdf          : article.rst 

Log message:
        twids

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.197&tr2=1.198&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst:1.197 manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst:1.198
--- manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst:1.197 Sat Feb 15 18:31:00 2003
+++ manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst       Sat Feb 15 18:31:35 2003
@@ -485,9 +485,9 @@
 
 When a person places papers on a desk, they
 are usually not placed in the same orientation with each other
-(unless explicitly building a grid).
+(unless the person is explicitly building a grid).
 Rather, the papers are arranged so that the bottom edge of 
-the page points towards the viewer, i.e. there's a kind of
+each page points towards the viewer, i.e. so that there's a kind of
 "vanishing point" at the viewer's stomach.
 
 We have found that simulating this on a computer screen
@@ -503,9 +503,9 @@
    are rotated so that their local vertical axis points to
    the vanishing point (nadir) placed outside the screen.
 
-Interestingly, it appears in our experience 
+Interestingly, in our experience, it seems
 that the placement of the nadir should
-be an absolute *angle* below the center of the screen from
+be at an absolute *angle* below the center of the screen from
 the viewer's point of view, rather than related to the size
 of the screen.