[Adonthell-general] Dwarven Origins, Draft Two

[Andrew Michael Phillips]

I've finished my second draft revisions to the first draft. The new draft 
can be found at 
http://endor.hsutx.edu/~cptlogic/adonthell/dwordraft2.hmtl
Comments?

Andrew

-- 
All that is gold does not glitter,
  Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
  Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
>From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
  A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
  The crownless again shall be king