Re: Включване в http://gnu.org/gnu/gnu-user-groups.html

[Yavor Doganov]

В 14:16 +0300 на 27.07.2009 (пн), Ivaylo Valkov написа:
> Dear maintainer of the `GNU Users Groups ` list located at 
> http://www.gnu.org/gnu/gnu-user-groups.html,

Няма такъв отговорник.  user-groups е псевдоним на address@hidden,
където записват данните на групите заради някаква все още нереализирана
програма за членство във ФСС, след което прехвърлят билета на нас.
Най-добре разкарай цялото обръщение.

> Our group is a different form the Bulgarian users group at 

s/a different form/very different from/

> There exits couple of variants of GNU - the most notable 
> GNU/Linux (to our great regret known as `Linux`); 

По принцип "couple" е чифт, макар че в разговорната реч се употребява и
като "няколко".  Има и печатна грешка "exits".  По-добре ми звучи така:

There are several variants of GNU -- the most popular GNU/Linux (much to
our regret more known as "Linux"); GNU/Herd and GNU/kFreeBSD.

> We refuse to call the system `Linux`, because there exists very important 
> reasons 
> not to do it.

s/exists/are/
BTW, кавичките в ASCII са `', не ``.

> We are gathered together by our affiliations to the Free Software Movement - 
> our 

Движението с малки букви.

> Our group exits to :

s/exits/exists/

Или махни "to" накрая, или махни "To" в началото от всяка точка от
списъка.

> - To help each other with advice, directions and other natural for computer 
> community activities;

Липсва пълен член -- s/for computer/for the computer/.

> Everyone can join our group as long as he/she conforms certain rules.

s/conforms/agrees to follow/.

> We do not consider this as something wrong

Лошо е, но не е неетично.  Предпочитам "We do not consider this as
something fundamentally wrong".  Или "utterly".

> which is often convenient for them.
                ^more
За подсилване.

Липсват два абзаца:

If you feel in a similar way, send a request for membership to the
gug-bg project by visit your page "My Group Membership" and typing
"gug-bg" in the "Request For Inclusion" box.  It is a good idea to write
a comment or even better -- send a message to the list with short
information about yourself.

The membership is formal; in practice the only "privileges" are the
right to edit the web pages and the possibility to assign tasks to you.

> The access to our mailing list is free.

Малко странно е това.  "Everyone can subscribe to the mailing list"
избягва гадаенето какъв е този свободен и/или безплатен достъп.

> Please follow this rules when you communicate with other members of the list 
> and 

s/this/these/

> with everyone who ask for help in the mailing list:

s/ask/asks/  s/in/on/

> - Do not behave arrogantly with users, which do not have your profound  

s/, which/who/

> knowledge in the subject.

s/in/of/

>  When you have to explain  in detail.
                   ^, 
Още по-добре е да обърнеш словореда.