Re: [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst

[hemppah]

Quoting Tuomas Lukka <address@hidden>:

> On Tue, Jan 21, 2003 at 06:19:49AM -0500, Hermanni Hyytiälä wrote:
> > Log message:
> >     Clean up
> ...
> >  
> > -Where in Gzz, we don't know the location, we know only the *identify*,
> like this
> > +Where in Gzz, we don't know the location, we know only the *identity*,
> like following:
> 
> ;)
> 
> 1) "where" is strange

Agree. Bad English...

> 
> 2) we don't know the location - ? of what?

of data what we are looking for, will add it.

> 
> 3) identify -> identity

This was noticed and fixed ;).

> 
> 4) "like this" is actually better than "like following" (which doesn't parse
> right), 
>    maybe "as follows"?

Agree.

Btw, I added a link to web page, which contains information about ID structures
used in Notes/Domino --> there might be some useful ideas for our purposes also.

-Hermanni

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