[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst

[Hermanni Hyytiälä]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Hermanni Hyytiälä <address@hidden>      03/01/21 07:05:46

Modified files:
        storm          : article.rst 

Log message:
        Updates and fixes

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.26&tr2=1.27&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.26 manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.27
--- manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.26  Tue Jan 21 06:46:06 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/article.rst       Tue Jan 21 07:05:45 2003
@@ -162,16 +162,17 @@
 
 replicaID/viewID/documentID
 
-Also, we can refer to same document, through *many different* views:
-replicaID/viewID1/documentID
-replicaID/viewID2/documentID
+Also, we can refer to same document, through *many different* views 
(analogical to Gzz's dimensions ?):
+notes://<server>/replicaID/viewID1/documentID
+notes://<server>/replicaID/viewID2/documentID
 
+Here's a real example:
 
Notes://server/D235632D00313587/38D22BF5E8F088348525JK7500129B2C/REWB3FDE0D53807B67C2256CB50026FCVV
 
 For information about IDs in Notes:
 
http://www-12.lotus.com/ldd/doc/tools/c/4.5/api45ug.nsf/85255d56004d2bfd85255b1800631684/00d000c1005800c985255e0e00726863?OpenDocument
 
-Where in Gzz, we don't know the location, we know only the *identity*, like 
following:
+In Gzz, however, we don't know the location, we know only the *identity* of 
data what we are looking for, as follows:
 
 urn-5:FAB3FDE0hgfD5kkjj3807B67C2256CfsdB50026FC51 
 
@@ -187,8 +188,9 @@
 in the *same* (physical) structure, data and design of data is very loosely 
coupled with 
 each other.
 
-Additionally, worth mention is that how things are going towards 
non-hierarchical reference models, 
-for instance, Notes and Gzz, which both are based on the same Xanalogical 
model.
+Additionally, we should emphatize that how things are going towards 
non-hierarchical reference models, 
+for instance, Notes(hierarchical) and Gzz(non-hierarchical), which both are 
based on the same 
+xanalogical model.
 
 "Usability in the face of intermittent connectivity" is
 more than just mobile applications: It is also copying data