Re: [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst

[hemppah]

Quoting Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>:

> CVSROOT:      /cvsroot/gzz
> Module name:  manuscripts
> Changes by:   Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/01/25 16:51:38
> 
> Modified files:
>       storm          : article.rst 
> 
> Log message:
>       bit
> 
> CVSWeb URLs:
>
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.37&tr2=1.38&r1=text&r2=text
> 
> Patches:
> Index: manuscripts/storm/article.rst
> diff -u manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.37
> manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.38
> --- manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.37        Sat Jan 25 13:34:09 2003
> +++ manuscripts/storm/article.rst     Sat Jan 25 16:51:38 2003
> @@ -96,6 +96,10 @@
>  We present a design which addresses the issues we have raised.
>  We are currently in prototype stage, which we describe...
>  
> +->
> +We present Storm (for *storage module*), a design which addresses the issues
> 
> +we have described. 
> +
>  This paper is structured as follows.


Should we make clear what are the contributions of our article in the
introduction part ? I propose the following order:

'We present Storm...'
'The contributions of the Storm design...'
'This paper is structured as follows...


-Hermanni


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