Re: [DotGNU]first draft for FD press release

[Norbert Bollow]

> The way you do the "not released yet" is to submit it as embargod for a set 
> date and/or time to be released.

I know the "to be released on ..." keywords, but I was trying to
express "not suitable for publication because this is only a
preliminary draft".

> Otherwise I am sure there are minor technical details to
> consider and have correct but I like the overall style.  Of
> course, this also reflects the fact that there is a lack of
> press contact experiance in the list.  Certainly it may
> actually need to be changed in various ways I do not know or
> have the press experiance to judge.

One of my clients runs a marketing consultancy in the US
( http://marketingspecifics.com )  I'm sure I could ask her for
a favor to look over the press release for us.  What do you
think?

Greetings, Norbert.

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