Yes, a shorter, clearer message would be great! Would you or someone like to draft one? Can we borrow ideas from CFPs from other conferences that you like? :)
Sacha
I see that the document is very thorough. But if a call for
participation is so long, people with little time available will be less
incentivated to propose make a talk. It is better to make more short
communications than a long one. And it is better to address concerns
with the particular details addressed instead of having everyone read
the whole framework of what concerns all cases.
Is it possible to divide this call into the most essential to get people
involved? Is this the best way?